by stefano.covino » Fri Jul 10, 2015 9:12 am
Hi all,
the proceeding is of course following the actual paper and therefore I have only marginal comments:
. Introduction
- No evidence of (spectral?) variability. The sentence is not completely clear.
- $\gamma$-ray. You write it without the hyphen. If this is what you want (and not a typo for instance) is fine, else please correct. Here and later in the proceeding.
. EBL measurements
- may be "Wilks' theorem"?
Good work,
Stefano
Hi all,
the proceeding is of course following the actual paper and therefore I have only marginal comments:
. Introduction
- No evidence of (spectral?) variability. The sentence is not completely clear.
- $\gamma$-ray. You write it without the hyphen. If this is what you want (and not a typo for instance) is fine, else please correct. Here and later in the proceeding.
. EBL measurements
- may be "Wilks' theorem"?
Good work,
Stefano
